Beauty was a girl, she lived in a village. Her father was an inventer.Beauty liked reading and she often went to library.
One day she wanted to change a book, she has just finished, when she met Gaston, a boy who was in love with her.
a few days later, beauty's father went to a festival of invents. He got lost and his horse came back to the village, the Beauty's father wasn't with it.
beauty went to look for her father.
She got into a castle ande she faund her father. A Beast had locked him. The Beast was enchanted.
Beauty stayed in the castle and her father could go.
The Beast tried to win the heart of Beauty.
Gaston went to the castle to kill the Beast, while Beauty was falling in love with Beast.
Gaston died and the Beast was hurt. Beauty kissed Beast and broke the charm.
The Beast and your servant were growing into humans.
Beauty and Beast got married and they lived happily.
I think this film is more apropiate for children because is a film of cartton, but the adult can see the film too.
Is a story more beautiful and I recommend.
Ohhhhh te beast and the beauty,I love this film!:)
ResponderEliminarGOOD WORK SOFIA. HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS.
ResponderEliminarBeauty was a girl (she) WHO lived in a village. Her father was an inventer.
Beauty liked reading and she often went to library.
One day she wanted to (change)RETURN a book she haD just finished, when she met Gaston, a boy who was in love with her.
A few days later, beauty's father went to aN INVENTION festival (of invents). He got lost and WHEN his horse came back to the village, (the) Beauty's father wasn't (with)ON it.
Beauty went to look for her father.
She (got into)WENT INSIDE a castle and(e) she (faund) FOUND her father. A Beast had locked him UP. The Beast was (enchanted) UNDER A SPELL.
Beauty stayed in the castle and her father (could)WAS ALLOWED TO go.
The Beast tried to win (the heart of) Beauty'S HEART.
Gaston went to the castle to kill the Beast, while Beauty was falling in love with THE Beast.
Gaston died and the Beast was hurt. Beauty kissed THE Beast and broke the (charm)SPELLED.
The Beast and (your)HIS servantS (were growing)TURNED into humans.
Beauty and THE Beast got married and they lived happily.
I think this film is more aPpropiate for children because is a CARTOON film (of cartton), but (the) adultS can see the film too.
IT is a VERY BEAUTIFUL story (more beautiful) and I recommend IT.